
honestly, it might sound weird. A lot of people in our generation kind of suck at writing. Some advice: 1. Read. read a lot. find favorite authors and study how they write. 2. read your own work aloud as you edit. sometimes things look right, but sound wrong. 3. try varying length and kinds of sentences.
So I didn’t say that. Also, you were responding to three entirely different perspectives and assessments. That’s the opposite of generalization. You’re still batting .000%. I recommend you add some books without pictures to your vast library because you have the language competency of a small child.