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Anyone else feel like their dialogue doesn’t make sense/sounds not smart/basic? Really doubting myself as a writer 🥀
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Anonymous 1d

Every character is probably in your voice. That’s pretty normal for a first draft. How the hell would you know what people sound like until you figure out who they are?

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Anonymous 1d

honestly, it might sound weird. A lot of people in our generation kind of suck at writing. Some advice: 1. Read. read a lot. find favorite authors and study how they write. 2. read your own work aloud as you edit. sometimes things look right, but sound wrong. 3. try varying length and kinds of sentences.

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Anonymous 1d

Most of the time we think our writing is worse than it is. Find someone to discuss your dialogue with. See what they think is going right and what can be improved.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 1d

Correct. Reading is the best way to improve your writing, even more than writing will.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 1d

what a generalization 😭

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 1d

That’s not what a generalization is. Maybe you’d know that if you read more.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 23h

“a general statement or concept obtained by inference from specific cases”… literally what you did when you said a lot of people in our generation suck at writing! I read plenty, thank you very much, but im sorry you feel the need to act so snarky in a yikyak comment section 😭

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 23h

So I didn’t say that. Also, you were responding to three entirely different perspectives and assessments. That’s the opposite of generalization. You’re still batting .000%. I recommend you add some books without pictures to your vast library because you have the language competency of a small child.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 21h

Definitely think reading will help me more. Haven’t read a physical non educational book in years 🫣 That’s probably why I’m struggling

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 20h

It’s kind of hard to find someone to bounce ideas off of since I’m not friends with any writers ngl 🥀

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 20h

It definitely isn’t helping.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 17h

okay so I mixed up who commented what… but the comment I replied to WAS generalizing! literally the definition of generalizing!! idk why you’re so pressed about this and why you feel it’s necessary to insult me and be rude to others!

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 17h

No.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 16h

as the person who wrote the comment…yeah it could be considered a generalization, and yeah you do seem unnecessarily defensive and rude.

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Anonymous replying to -> #3 16h

Cool story. It still isn’t a generalization.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 16h

Did you even read my comment with the literal definition of the word?

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 15h

I know the definition of the word. Did you understand the definition or just read it? Big difference.

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 15h

it’s…. pretty cut and dry bro 😭 idk why you’re so defensive and acting like I can’t read

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 15h

It isn’t an act.

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 14h

HAHA they literally blocked me 😭

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