Share Your Art on Sidechat | Other than obviously fixing this up and darkening the lines and whatnot, what can i make better about this? It’s a tattoo design for my bsf and i want to get the most advice i can :)

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Other than obviously fixing this up and darkening the lines and whatnot, what can i make better about this? It’s a tattoo design for my bsf and i want to get the most advice i can :)

33 upvotes, 5 comments. Sidechat image post by Anonymous in Share Your Art. "Other than obviously fixing this up and darkening the lines and whatnot, what can i make better about this? It’s a tattoo design for my bsf and i want to get the most advice i can :)"

Anonymous 7w

add some shading if possible. and the lashes on the center eye are amazing but the lashes on the other eyes look a tad more stagnant.

Anonymous 7w

honestly it looks really sick as is! the only suggestions i have are shading the inner areas of the wings to create more depth and maybe make the feather shape more consistent throughout? you have some ending in points and some slightly rounded, i personally like the rounded better but you could ask your friend what they prefer!

Anonymous 7w

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Anonymous

#2 7w

Yo fuck u hood

Anonymous

OP 7w

hope this isn’t a lady talking like that