How did he teleport from eating it to kissing your jaw…
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Anonymous27w
“I sop”😭
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Anonymous27w
The fact he kept calling you baby and the complained how he wanted to sext made me know immediately he was gonna do it anyways
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Anonymous27w
SOMEONE GET THIS MAN ON AO3 STAT I JUST FOUND THE NEXT NEW AUTHOR!
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Anonymous27w
I’m really trying to visualize this but I’m just so confused on what position(s) this is
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Anonymous27w
it’s not even well written as a professional smut writer. it must be more sensual
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Anonymous27w
First of all, that’s really disgusting that he fully ignored a clear boundary like that.
Secondly…as a writer…yikes 😬
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Anonymous27w
Does reading that really turn yall on?? 😭
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Anonymous26w
i’ve literally gotten that before
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Anonymous#127w
He said he got it from his notes app buti don’t believe him
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AnonymousOP27w
That sounds like a load of bs
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Anonymous#127w
I’d say it is probably from the notes app bc of the occasional typo
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Anonymous#227w
Still lame
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Anonymous#327w
no baby…
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Anonymous#327w
Nah ao3 is too good for this trash. This is wattpad fs
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Anonymous#527w
good point
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Anonymous#327w
WATTPAD STAT
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Anonymous#627w
STOP I HAD THAT QUESTION TOOOO??? LIKE WHEN DID YOU FLIP ME OVER HOW WAS I ALREADY ON MY BACK BUT NOT?
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Anonymous#627w
Idek what that means tbh
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AnonymousOP27w
You should send back a ss with red peer reviewed revisions all over it
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Anonymous#627w
Oh I so would buti blocked him
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Anonymous#727w
I think on stomach then back
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AnonymousOP27w
Somehow
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Anonymous#827w
Lidoly. Idk about these men bro
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Anonymous#927w
Unfortunately it did for me
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Anonymous#927w
Well I’m shitting on him so no it didnt for me. In books it does
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Anonymous#927w
no lmao 😭
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Anonymous#1227w
after reading this, this is full of sexual non sequiturs and audacious assumptions about his lack of impotency, and the delusion that you’d reciprocate with an organic orgasm to his amateur display of humiliation and incompetence 😭😭😭😭
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Anonymous#1227w
the content is inconsistent and haphazard. terribly written. i won’t dissect this mess any further i already regret reading this nightmare. not even ChatGPT could save ts omg 😭😭😭
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Anonymous#1227w
I love how you analyzed it
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Anonymous#1427w
Yeah as a writer it made me annoyed, all the grammar issues. I couldn’t even read it properly.