How did he teleport from eating it to kissing your jaw…
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Anonymous1w
“I sop”😭
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Anonymous1w
The fact he kept calling you baby and the complained how he wanted to sext made me know immediately he was gonna do it anyways
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Anonymous1w
SOMEONE GET THIS MAN ON AO3 STAT I JUST FOUND THE NEXT NEW AUTHOR!
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Anonymous1w
I’m really trying to visualize this but I’m just so confused on what position(s) this is
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Anonymous1w
Bro wrote a whole ahh assignment
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Anonymous1w
it’s not even well written as a professional smut writer. it must be more sensual
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Anonymous1w
First of all, that’s really disgusting that he fully ignored a clear boundary like that.
Secondly…as a writer…yikes 😬
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Anonymous1w
Does reading that really turn yall on?? 😭
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Anonymous6d
i’ve literally gotten that before
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Anonymous#11w
He said he got it from his notes app buti don’t believe him
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AnonymousOP1w
That sounds like a load of bs
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Anonymous#11w
I’d say it is probably from the notes app bc of the occasional typo
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Anonymous#21w
Still lame
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Anonymous#31w
no baby…
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Anonymous#31w
Nah ao3 is too good for this trash. This is wattpad fs
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Anonymous#51w
good point
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Anonymous#31w
WATTPAD STAT
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Anonymous#61w
STOP I HAD THAT QUESTION TOOOO??? LIKE WHEN DID YOU FLIP ME OVER HOW WAS I ALREADY ON MY BACK BUT NOT?
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Anonymous#61w
Idek what that means tbh
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AnonymousOP1w
You should send back a ss with red peer reviewed revisions all over it
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Anonymous#61w
Oh I so would buti blocked him
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Anonymous#71w
I think on stomach then back
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AnonymousOP1w
Somehow
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Anonymous#81w
Lidoly. Idk about these men bro
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Anonymous#91w
Unfortunately it did for me
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Anonymous#91w
Well I’m shitting on him so no it didnt for me. In books it does
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Anonymous#91w
no lmao 😭
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Anonymous#121w
after reading this, this is full of sexual non sequiturs and audacious assumptions about his lack of impotency, and the delusion that you’d reciprocate with an organic orgasm to his amateur display of humiliation and incompetence 😭😭😭😭
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Anonymous#121w
the content is inconsistent and haphazard. terribly written. i won’t dissect this mess any further i already regret reading this nightmare. not even ChatGPT could save ts omg 😭😭😭
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Anonymous#121w
I love how you analyzed it
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Anonymous#141w
Yeah as a writer it made me annoyed, all the grammar issues. I couldn’t even read it properly.