i see what ur going for but it’s a few too many patterns imo, maybe replace the vest?

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It doesn’t seem cohesive, like there’s too much going on. I’d drop the belt or the vest. The hat works well with the blue shirt and the tan pants really well. I really like the tie design. I just think the belt thing is too much. Also I’m from a boring ass Midwest state so take it with a grain of salt.

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Imo pants too plain for how awesome the top is

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I’m not a fashion guru or anything, but I’m looking at this like I would a character design (I design those a lot). It does kind of look like a lot of patterns that oppose eachother. I would actually replace your little cravat/ascot and opt for a plain one. Overall though, with those patterned items—each one makes a statement, let the item stand out and highlight the outfit. (That’s, of course, just an opinion though…)

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Bro looks like a playing card

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It’s giving art teacher

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