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I NEED HELP MY FANFICTION IS TOO FAST PACED
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Anonymous 12w

Have your characters do stupid things! Have them complain about the mundane, take their frustrations about the plot out on their roommate eating the last of their cereal! The small moments reveal more about their personality and what’s going on in their heads!

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 12w

thank you! but idk how to incorporate it in this story it’s like an omegaverse mafia type of thing

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Anonymous replying to -> OP 12w

You could have a fight or something and a main character get hurt and take time to recover or something

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 12w

thank you

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