Rhodey was autocorrected to Rodney for the whole fic

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entirely TOO many details and trying to be so mysterious ig with describing things , literally gets confusing at a point

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Recently? All lowercase letters

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Not sure how to call it, but every character felt like they were the same entity. Swap the names: you could not tell the difference at all. :’(

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personally? they introduced every single character with their height, start of the fic was a solid 5-7 paragraphs with each one describing a different character 😩

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