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This isn’t a Haiku. 5-7-5, not 4-5-4
Haiku of the day: Had the wrong milk My tummy hurts now But no regrets
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Anonymous 15h

Haiku, especially in English, don’t always have a pattern of 17 syllables. It’s a convenient metric to remember the most common approach in this particular form of Japanese poetry, but that adherence can sometimes make them sound stiff in English. And if you want to maintain 17, you can divvy them up between the lines to different lengths, like with a 593 pattern.

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Anonymous 20h

Can you give an example

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Anonymous replying to -> #1 19h

I had the wrong milk My stomach hurts like hell now I have no regrets

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Anonymous replying to -> #2 16h

This guy gets it

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Anonymous replying to -> #4 15h

I want to try a 593: Drank some bad milky I’ve made this mistake many a-time I’m shitting

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