My suggestion is if you want it to be easy to read from a bit of a distance and such, find a shorter quote. I love the idea of these quotes but the fewer words you have, the bigger the letters can be and it’ll be easier to work with cuz a grad cap is a lot smaller than you’d think haha. I ran into the same issue when I did mine a while back

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Some I’ve seen that I really love: NO MORE SKOOL O!RUL82 - O! R U GR4DU8N’ 2? The best is yet to come OUTRO: GRADUATION ANSWER: DIPLOMA

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The ones you have are good, if you’re stuck here’s some more: The best is yet to come, I know why my back hurts/it’s so my wings can sprout?, forever we are young, shine, dream, smile , we gotta dance in the rain, cuz you know I’m a fighter, I believed this small feather would become my wings, gotta stay gold, let’s just feel the youth young, wild and free, etc. These ones are a bit more positive.

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