she’s too short for a ramp…. how fuckinf short is she i’m going to lose my mind
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Anonymous8w
shadow daddy is so tall 🥺🥺🥺
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Anonymous8w
that one scene where the green dragons wanted to smell her and shit and she’s was like “i’m mira’s sister and have green dragon scales in my armor” reimagined in my art style
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Anonymous8w
i like this one a lot personally
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Anonymous8w
guys i fixed it
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Anonymous8w
i’m giggling so much rn
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Anonymous8w
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Anonymous8w
Stop this is so funny 😭
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Anonymous8w
she’s surged to her toes (elongated her toes for extra detail)
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Anonymous8w
she gained access to her power and now gets horny bc of it… please tell me it stops
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Anonymous8w
this one takes the cake
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Anonymous8w
This might actually make me hate this book less. I wish the whole thing was satire
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Anonymous8w
they just had sex for the first time
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Anonymous8w
she’s so tiny she can’t even walk up a ramp 💀
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Anonymous8w
“quacking” in my boots is killing me😭😭
🦆👢
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Anonymous8w
this is for you #4
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Anonymous8w
This CANNOT be the book everyone’s saying to read 😭
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Anonymous8w
I wish for you to know my roommate and I have recreated this scene with box cutters
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Anonymous8w
Oh holy shit this book is worse than I thought
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Anonymous8w
Op i think im in love with you
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Anonymous8w
SIX SEVEN (i’m so sorry lmao)
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Anonymous8w
so you’re telling me her powers are the ability to stop time AND lighting 😀
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Anonymous8w
OP YOU’RE FUCKING KILLING ME LMAOOOOO
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Anonymous8w
You are actually hilarious😭😭and I also can’t imagine reading this book it looks awful omg
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Anonymous8w
STOP ADDING MORE IN THE COMMENTS OP I CANT STOP LAUGHING
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Anonymous8w
these drawings belong in a museum
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Anonymous8w
this is the only correct way to annotate books
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Anonymous8w
Lmao i love the FW hate
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Anonymous8w
I wish we were friends
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Anonymous8w
please let me purchase this annotated version when you’re done omfg
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Anonymous8w
BRO I TRIED SO HARD TO LIKE IT! i just like dragons i didn't think it was going to be so... eugh
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Anonymous8w
Quacking
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Anonymous8w
LOLLL I just read that page today!!
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AnonymousOP8w
I’d actually pay you to annotate my books 😭
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AnonymousOP8w
She just like me frfr (2ft tall)
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AnonymousOP8w
Idk 4’10. RY tries to play it off as a result of Violet’s EDS but it’s not. EDS doesn’t correlate with being short, I know tall people with eds.
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Anonymous#58w
OPPS LMAO
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AnonymousOP8w
OOPS 💀💀 my spelling is great i promise
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AnonymousOP8w
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Anonymous#18w
i’ve read that
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AnonymousOP8w
she reminds me of coraline’s other mother
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Anonymous#48w
is it because i’m so short and petite and half my hair is silver
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AnonymousOP8w
😩😩😩 i’ll be your 6ft-everything, chest wider than the mississippi river delta, alpha male rival
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AnonymousOP8w
These drawings should be in a museum 😭
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Anonymous#28w
this is the greatest compliment ever thank you
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Anonymous#38w
I’m a 6 ft woman with EDS and my bff is 6 ft as well with it too 💀💀 I’ve honestly never met a woman that was short with eds lmao
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Anonymousmother_russia8w
It pisses me off that the fandom uses it as an excuse for RY to play into gender norms and stereotypes. I’m 5’10 and have major hypermobility issues, and had to quit my sport for a while because of it.
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Anonymous#18w
What book is this?
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Anonymous#38w
Yeah that’s super frustrating. I didn’t even know that was in that series bc I haven’t read it. My EDS sucks the life out of me every day 💀 it caused my POTS which makes any actively practically impossible
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Anonymous#38w
Do they at least give her health issues and problems in the story that are extremely convenient timing? Like she’s just walking and her knee pops out or she rides a horse and her hip dislocates?
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Anonymous#78w
The fourth wing
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Anonymous#88w
It’s REALLY bad
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Anonymous#78w
i think she’s talking about caroline’s mother from the movie caroline lmao
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AnonymousOP8w
Nope! In fact it gets worse
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AnonymousOP8w
That’s crazy 💀
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Anonymous#38w
i’ve genuinely have never been more afraid to finish a book in my life than right now
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AnonymousOP8w
THE FUCK
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Anonymous#48w
I just know the annotations are gonna be crazy PLEASE keep us updated bc you’re the only thing saving me from finals
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AnonymousOP8w
she so small and tiny that she doesn’t reach the middle of the bed
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Anonymous#48w
finals this late is crazy 😭😭 good luck bro
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Anonymous#58w
OH LMAO I JSUT SAID THAT
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AnonymousOP8w
Oranges?!!??!?!!
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Anonymous#48w
lmao ya she defeated the guy that wanted to kill her with an orange
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Anonymous#108w
no fr 😅 like i’ve read wattpad stories with better writing than this
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Anonymous#108w
That’s what I said. I read it, didn’t like it and almost DNF. Someone said “it gets better when the dragons show up”
It did not in fact get better. The writing feels so disjointed that I fully believe it was written by at least 4 people or ai.
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Anonymous#38w
THATS WHAT IM THINKING
the world building is exceptionally bad and characters feel so forced and shallow that i’m convinced it’s satire
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AnonymousOP8w
The fucking dragon 😭
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AnonymousOP8w
I've always imagined the ramp to be like the ones in American Ninja Warrior
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AnonymousOP8w
See that would be funny as fuck if the entire rest of the excerpts you’ve sent didn’t stretch my patience paper thin
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AnonymousOP8w
AND she has more than one dragon which has never happened ever 🙄 i hate violet so much. Stupid ass Daenerys copy. “Stormborn”…RY stole that and ran with it in a very literal sense
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Anonymous#38w
how RY probably felt
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AnonymousOP8w
Lmao me when I steal
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AnonymousOP8w
Stop i cant take this anymore 😭😭😭
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AnonymousOP8w
I wanted to start a quan mills book club for my friends but given how atrocious this looks i may need to start with ry
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Anonymous#168w
LMAO IM CRINE 😭😭
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Anonymous#48w
quan mills my goat 🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐
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AnonymousOP8w
I GOT BOTH MY HOMEBOYS PREGNANT
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Anonymous#48w
OLD THOT NEXT DOOR
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AnonymousOP8w
Really nitpick-y thing, but why does every paragraph start with dialogue 😭 also what even is “flat-out bluster”
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AnonymousOP8w
This was a delight to read through after a day of working at a bookstore where the people all love 4th wing and I (the owner) refuse to read it 😂
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Anonymous#248w
Yeah my friend is OBSESSED with this series she says she needs it like oxygen😭so she’s been trying to get me to read it but after reading these excerpts…eugh is right😭I’m side eyeing the fuck out of her rn