Ask Anything on Sidechat | Trying out some comedy, is this funny? So there was once a guy at a shop, and he was trying to sell the store owner something he called a sex stone. The store owner turned him away, saying it was just a fucking rock

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Trying out some comedy, is this funny? So there was once a guy at a shop, and he was trying to sell the store owner something he called a sex stone. The store owner turned him away, saying it was just a fucking rock

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Anonymous 2w

I see the potential but I think you could rework it to make it funnier. The setup makes the punchline obvious and personally I like to be surprised.

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Anonymous 2w

I feel the rhythm of how you deliver the joke is funny. Also I’d reword the second half to “The store owner said it’s just a fucking rock”

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Anonymous

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Make it personal "I hate pawn shops. This guy just tried to sell me a sex stone... all I got was this fucking rock"

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